minutes before and after

[anshika chauhan]

POEM

MINUTES BEFORE AND AFTER....

10 Minutes before i was dancing with rolling gravity,

moving each step carefully and hoping to attract the stars around me.

8 minutes before i was singing with blowing stellar winds,

trying to catch hard notes as soon as possible.

6 minutes before i was debating with glowing and burning  flares of  the sun,

for better functioning of the solar system.

4 minutes before i was consoling  pluto

who was hawling and crying

 because it is not a considered as a planet.

2 minutes before i was painting a scenery with AURORA ,

so that you can capture it in your cameras and our mind.

and right now,

i am sitting in the lap of nature,

And i found that my imagination is faster than light.............

:-by Anshika Chauhan

INDIA

 

[Pete Presland]

A very nice poem, poor old Pluto it will always be a planet to my generation 

Could one of the mods move this post to more appropriate section, thanks.

[anshika chauhan]

thanks this is my first poem.....

 

[John]

Nice to see some poetry on the forum

If there is one subject that stirs the emotions to express yourself then it's astronomy - what we are witnessing is amazing in so many ways

[ronl]

Poetry in motion, literally, thank you for sharing.

[geoflewis]

1 hour ago, Pete Presland said:

A very nice poem, poor old Pluto it will always be a planet to my generation 

Ditto...!! What's more is they ruined my solar system mnemonic: Many Volcanoes Erupt Making Jam Sandwiches Usually Not Pleasant

A lovely poem Anshika, thanks for sharing.

[johnfosteruk]

Very nice, Ditto Pete about Pluto!

[anshika chauhan]

thankyou  everyone 

its awesome to see you guys reacting to this poem which was unexpected...

it lifted my spirits up....(for astro-poetry)

 

[anshika chauhan]

5 hours ago, John said:

Nice to see some poetry on the forum

If there is one subject that stirs the emotions to express yourself then it's astronomy - what we are witnessing is amazing in so many ways

thankyou sir 

 

[anshika chauhan]

4 hours ago, geoflewis said:

Ditto...!! What's more is they ruined my solar system mnemonic: Many Volcanoes Erupt Making Jam Sandwiches Usually Not Pleasant

A lovely poem Anshika, thanks for sharing.

thankyou sir

by the way i like that quote

 

[michaelmorris]

I poetry good for the soul.  Thanks for sharing.